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Project 4
Saturday, December 5, 2015
14.2 Draft of Open Letter
Fellow classmates as you read my letter let me know where I
need to add, delete or where revision is needed. Look for any global issues
that may need attention and let me know if you have suggestions where I could
concentrate more on the letter. I appreciate your candid opinion which can add
to strengthening the letter.
14.3 Reflection on Peer Review Project #4
I peer reviewed Steven Duron and Deborah Ortega’s project 4
drafts. By reading through their papers it became a refresher in my mind of the
studies and writing skills we learned in this class. Constructive comments are
appreciated to refine what has been written. Deborah felt she was not much of a
writer and I disagree with that her draft is well written. Steven’s draft I feel is clear and concise
and is well written and touches on our learned skills and I enjoyed reading it. Feedback helps us to put the finishing touches on the paper with a fresh set of eyes.
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