7.5 Draft of P2 Rhetorical Analysis

Fellow classmates my draft will reflect the text The Effects of the Great Recession: Health and Well-Being. Please check for Positive and Active Voice and Variety these are my weaknesses and I would greatly appreciate your input. Also, please provide me with any constructive criticism which would be helpful. If you can look at my thesis statement and review my body paragraphs as they transition from one to the other your comments will be welcomed.